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The Stuff Things Are Made Of

On the first day of class, my 9th grade social studies teacher, Mr. Litivich, listed on the blackboard certain words we were not allowed to use. They mainly consisted of non-politically correct terms. A few, however, were words that he thought displayed laziness and lack of focus on the part of the speaker.

We were not allowed to use the words “stuff“, “thing“, or “um“.

“Stuff” and “thing” should always be substituted with the actual stuff or thing, he said. And while thinking of the appropriate words to use -- instead of using “stuff” or “thing” -- we better not delay with “um ... um ... um”. He'd prefer we remain completely silent.

To say the least, this on-going exercise definitely improved our speaking and thinking skills. How many good speakers do you know of who use “stuff”or “thing” or utter “um ... um ... um” while searching for the right words to use?

When I arrived at college, professor Samuel Pickering reiterated such sentiments in my Short Story class. This time the focus was on writing.

I've seen “stuff” and “thing” in enough articles to warrant this post. Not using these words is one of the easiest ways to improve the quality of your work, whether written or oral.

Comments

Ricky Dhatt said:

In fourth grade, I had a teacher that did not tolerate use of "um". If you made the mistake of going up to her desk and saying "um....", she would tell you "We don't speak umish in this class, go back to your seat." You had to wait five minutes before you could go back up.
# July 14, 2004 1:19 PM

Jim Bolla said:

Well hopefully you didn't have to write a paper that referenced an article in a modern men's magazine about a member of the Fantastic Four taking taking up residence on one of the United States minor outlying islands. ;)
# July 14, 2004 2:02 PM

anon-e-moose said:

You can go stuff it! ;)
# July 14, 2004 3:03 PM

Anon said:

These type of anecdotal things are, um.. well, the kind of stuff that sticks with you for life.
# July 14, 2004 4:54 PM

Bruce Williams [MSFT] said:

This stuff makes sense for writing, but it seems like the kind of thing that would really hamper a free-flowing discussion. There is a reason those words exist, after all.
# July 15, 2004 2:18 PM

15Seconds said:

I agree that this advice makes sense for writing, but I'm not sure how it would really hamper a free-flowing discussion.

Just don't use the words, either replace them or omit them. :)
# July 15, 2004 2:33 PM

Bruce Williams [MSFT] said:

Maybe I just have a small brain, but when I'm focused on a particular topic of discussion, especially a really good back-and-forth discussion, I really don't have room in my head to be analyzing the exact words that I'm using. I don't really care, as long as the concepts I'm spewing are being understood.

I'm easy-going, though; I'll graciously allow you to refrain from those words if you really want to. <grin>
# July 20, 2004 1:45 AM
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